Waning wiles,
Crepuscular charms;
Icy isles,
Silent storms;
Fire fighting,
Dying desire;
Wounded writing,
Instigating ire;
Warm wounds,
Cold hearts;
Breaking bounds,
Precious – parts. . .
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About Me
- The Parish
- Mumbai, Maharashtra, India
- I am a deeply passionate man. A straight man. A little homophoebic. A lot tolerant. Life for me is very simple. Love the work I do. Love the wife I have. Listen to god and the inner voice from time to time. Listen to the music all the time!
20 comments:
Im confused :#
i had to use a dictionary for this one :-) but i did get something of it i think.like the last line...
Noojes: What are u confused about?
Janaki: Trust u to decode everything!
How about adding links to online dictionary sites or from wherever u hv taken these words from...lol!
i promise i tried v hard to find the pattern. i understood the lines individually. but the photo said a lot... beautiful
Rama, now read the lines as a story. a stucatto story . . .
as they say, a picture is worth a thousand words...
sometimes, even more.
i get ur tone... u think a child would understand the workings of a highly complicated mind?
besides, there is no other way to read this than a 'staccato' story.
i will come back to the story later in life...
Rama, u really think i have a complicated mind??? :-(
hey you still reeling in hurt? let them wounds heal. the 2 tracks that got merged and then divided will do you good. take heart Parish
i decoded it at my level, which is quite pedestrian as far as poetry is concerned.
all creative people have :D
NEXT CHAPTER!
Crepscular!
Not on your Nellie!
Round midnight,
Pick up your telly
and need i tell you
what to do with it?
Nothing from without
is real. How we forget.
This fight is real.
This is BEAUTIFUL! I can see a person here ... and yeah the twin tracks ... so Gemini!!!!!!
Agreed the words used require effort in decoding ...but once you do, a very intricate and ingenuous reality emerges!
Very well expressed!
And one more thing that I missed, this poem displays very aptly what a roller coaster life can be!!! High tides and low tides all part of the game!!!!!
Stories Untold: You made my day!
good work this is, and true even more than good; or at least likely to be!
and it reads better without the punctuation i find
though i do so love them punctuation people, trust.
i like this space you've made yours
you'll be seeing me sir :)
silence
you worship ?
just caught up with a lot Megha . . .
but will post soon!
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